“The first draft of anything is shit.”
―Ernest Hemingway
In the post below I pasted a little bit of the writing I’d done that week. For today’s post, I thought I’d let you see how that scene continued.
I hope you enjoy this chunk of my work, but as you read it remember it’s Draft Zero. I make no apology if anything about it is a bit shit. That’s the point, according to Hemingway at least, and I kinda think he knew what he was talking about.
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Work-in-progress 3
Title TK, Draft 0
‘I didn't know where he was half the time.’
‘It’s true he did his own thing a lot of the time,’ said Jonás. ‘But he got the work done.’
‘If you say so.’
Jonás flashed me a look. I wasn’t entirely sure what I was supposed to read into it. He seemed to be saying, I’m sorry. Or maybe, He gets like this, ignore him.
I couldn’t do that , however.
‘You’re saying he was lazy?’
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